A new poem for constructive critique.?

I think this is a very good poem. I like the subtle images that you place into the background. Everything isn't "in your face", you have to read the words and think about what this person is saying. If it wasn't for this "place" inside of him, where he could escape to, to get away from the trials and tribulations of this world and his daily life, he could not go on...he would die. This place revives him and he can continue. I like it. Thank you.