What do you think of these lyrics I wrote?

Well I really like the message you've got, and the way you've said it, with a sense of humour, whether that was intentional or not. But the "gays coming out" - if you're aiming for the mainstream everyone, being super sensitive as they are, is not going to like this, are goon to say you're phobic etc. But I really like it and I feel the same way as you so, 8/10! :) Good luck!